Jun 29, 2024
12:14:06am
12:14:06am
The big issue:
The main character is on her deathbed already (in hospice), so there really is no tension or motivation to live.
Within the first few minutes we can guess she’ll sacrifice herself in some way to help others.
Within the first few minutes we can guess she’ll sacrifice herself in some way to help others.
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