there that supposedly shows how this particular game was poorly ref'd, you need to include all the worst examples. Include not only the horrible Wyoming spot, but also the horrible BYU spot were Katoa was denied a first down after clearly getting across the line. That would show a pattern of bad spots and not just a one-off.
Get the better example of clear ineligible receiver down field when the entire Wyoming o-line was well past 3 yards when the ball was thrown.
Highlight that when BYU was called for ineligible down field (a legit call), it happened on a play were there was egregious defensive holding that happened right in front of the officials.
I would stay away from offensive holding unless you can show multiple, fully blatant examples that happened with a ref directly watching the action. Minor holding is just a part of every offensive play nowadays.
It's just not a strong case when you've only presented 5 examples and three of them are either very minor or questionable. It was one of the worst officiated games I've seen recently, btw.