Just got a revision back regarding an award entry that I wrote for a partner receiving an award. They rewrote the entry by rearranging the words, but not taking anything out, adding anything new, or correcting anything. Literally just rearranged the words. At that point, why bother? What did you add by doing that?
So here's what I've learned as a professional communicator (I almost want to put that in quotes, because it sounds so odd, but I guess that's one way of accurately describing me) ...OK, huge, huge, huge black widow is crawling on the outside of my home office window...it's in the basement, so this is a window well and that freaking spider is going to give me nightmares until I go and kill it....stay tuned....