The early submission deadline is Friday. I think I suggested 3 grammar corrections and one rephrase of a sentence. I'm not much of an editor really, just offered to provide some input.
As with our other kids, we offered suggestions about responses to the prompts but we've largely stayed out of it. My daughter's responses looked great and I think they did a good job of showing who she is and what her values are but they were completely different than what I expected.

She's our 4th and final kid to apply for BYU. Her 3 older brothers were accepted and attended. One is finished and the other two are cranking away on their degrees. I know she desperately wants to go to BYU. She's been approached for athletic opportunities at some smaller schools and as much as she loves her sport, she's all in for BYU. February 17th can't come soon enough.